Magazine/album advert - Draft 2 Audience Feedback

Magazine / Album advert Draft 2

Audience Feedback - Comments on the improvements made from draft 1 and what can be improved from draft 2

Change in the font style-Explanation

Khalifah Font-style                   Misdemeanor font-style (new font)

Digipak - Draft 2

In the 2nd draft of the digipak the two major changes made to it was the new font style added to the front cover,  as well as the CD disc made and placed within the digipak. A separate post has been posted on my blog explaining the construction of the CD disc as well as the meaning behind of the design. However, in terms of the front cover this new font style has been chosen by my audience as well as my self to be included to the front cover. It is suggested by my audience that there is an improvement to the front cover due to the new style font style making it more attractive. However , this can still be improved as it's been suggested also that the colour white can make it look a bit dull for which this will be taken to consideration in the next draft of the digipak.

CD DISC's Drafts (Part of Digipak) - Explanation & Stages of the Design

Digipak - Draft 1

Digipak draft 1 from Mustafa Ozz

The 1st draft of the digipak is still at the developing stage for which a variety of adjustments is needed to take place. At this stage my main goal was to pick the Images that would be used in my digipak as well as deciding whether or not these images would fit nicely in place with the digipak overall. The font style of the title will most definitely need to be adjusted as the font style and the size of it makes it look a bit 'tacky' as well as less attractive. The images were edited in Photoshop inorder for it to fit the size frame of 120x120mm in indesign which was the size it was required to be for the digipak (each individual image). A lot of work is needed to be done such as the back cover which requires numerous editing to conform to the conventions of a digipak e.g. song list and bar code. The resizing tool as well as sharpening tool was used specifically on photoshop to sharpen the images as some were blurry however, while transferring the images to indesign, the quality of the images were affected for which in the next draft this will not occur (considering a different computer will be used as the previous computer used to edit was internally damaged).

Music Video - All Scenes (Joseph Perry)